Request Review of sites

My-Brandon:
http://My-Brandon.com:
Admin: (must be an administrator)
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Could someone kindly review my sites.

I am currently working on this 2nd one, so recommendations would be welcomed as well.

hardcorepickers:
[bhttp://hardcorepickers.formyjob.net: [/b]
Admin: (must be an administrator)
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Hi, your request is not in the proper format mentioned in the guidelines. Next time, copy and paste the code given in the code box in the guidelines. Unfortunately, your request has been refused. Please take another look at our guidelines which are located here

Also, only one review per site at least every two weeks apart from each other please. Thanks.