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POETRY CONTEST!! WIN PRIZES!!!
by crystal786 Thu 03 Jul 2008, 17:46
Hi,
Whilst I have been on the forumotion support website I have realised that lots of you here write poetry. I am therefor having a poetry contest.
Prize:
Please do NOT copy poems from the internet! If you are caught cheating I will never let you enter any of my contests again.
I will have more contests in the future which will have a lot more prizes.
I will choose the best poem.
Whilst I have been on the forumotion support website I have realised that lots of you here write poetry. I am therefor having a poetry contest.
Prize:
Please do NOT copy poems from the internet! If you are caught cheating I will never let you enter any of my contests again.
I will have more contests in the future which will have a lot more prizes.
I will choose the best poem.
Last edited by crystal786 on Thu 03 Jul 2008, 20:04; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Add more prizes.)
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Re: POETRY CONTEST!! WIN PRIZES!!!
by Nazar Thu 03 Jul 2008, 18:11
Here's mine, i already posted this here,
I made it in 5th grade
Football Mix
I'm late for practice
Where's my pad?
I hope my coach isn't mad.
Where's my helmet, where my gear?
I'm yelling at my mom
she doesn't hear.
Where's my jersey?
Where's my glove?
I hope I can still tackle and shove.
Then my mom comes
and tells me a reason
"it's the end of football season"[b]
I made it in 5th grade
Football Mix
I'm late for practice
Where's my pad?
I hope my coach isn't mad.
Where's my helmet, where my gear?
I'm yelling at my mom
she doesn't hear.
Where's my jersey?
Where's my glove?
I hope I can still tackle and shove.
Then my mom comes
and tells me a reason
"it's the end of football season"
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Re: POETRY CONTEST!! WIN PRIZES!!!
by crystal786 Thu 03 Jul 2008, 18:19
Ok, Only one entry so far! Come on people, enter! Caihlem I know you do poetry so dont try and hide.
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by Caihlem Thu 03 Jul 2008, 18:36
If I entered one of my pieces, half would laugh, the others would praise only because I'm the Admin 
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Re: POETRY CONTEST!! WIN PRIZES!!!
by Nazar Thu 03 Jul 2008, 18:37
Caihlem wrote:If I entered one of my pieces, half would laugh, the others would praise only because I'm the Admin
lol
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Re: POETRY CONTEST!! WIN PRIZES!!!
by crystal786 Thu 03 Jul 2008, 18:40
That is not true. Now enter. You have now made me more convinced to see your poetry.Caihlem wrote:If I entered one of my pieces, half would laugh, the others would praise only because I'm the Admin
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by Nazar Thu 03 Jul 2008, 18:44
I would like to see some of Caihlem's poetry, i think they would be interesting 
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Re: POETRY CONTEST!! WIN PRIZES!!!
by crystal786 Thu 03 Jul 2008, 18:44
Me too.Nazar wrote:I would like to see some of Caihlem's poetry, i think they would be interesting
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by Caihlem Thu 03 Jul 2008, 18:54
Fine then
*Opens the word document*
A thick fog
Throw the haze
I cannot see
What lies ahead
What’s behind
I cannot say
The cries for help
Your voice
I cannot hear
I am lost
In this haze
In this fog
But I keep moving
Because what’s important
Isn’t where
It’s why
*Opens the word document*
A thick fog
Throw the haze
I cannot see
What lies ahead
What’s behind
I cannot say
The cries for help
Your voice
I cannot hear
I am lost
In this haze
In this fog
But I keep moving
Because what’s important
Isn’t where
It’s why
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Re: POETRY CONTEST!! WIN PRIZES!!!
by Nazar Thu 03 Jul 2008, 18:55
Caihlem wrote:Fine then
*Opens the word document*
A thick fog
Throw the haze
I cannot see
What lies ahead
What’s behind
I cannot say
The cries for help
Your voice
I cannot hear
I am lost
In this haze
In this fog
But I keep moving
Because what’s important
Isn’t where
It’s why
WOW! Nice Caihlem, thanks for sharing
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Re: POETRY CONTEST!! WIN PRIZES!!!
by crystal786 Thu 03 Jul 2008, 19:45
That is brilliant Caihlem! So meaningful! *Applause from the crowd*.
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by CANADIEN Thu 03 Jul 2008, 20:07
Are you allowed to bump your own threads, under 24 hours apart?
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Re: POETRY CONTEST!! WIN PRIZES!!!
by Hooray Pancakes! Thu 03 Jul 2008, 20:24
Winter
When the wintery breeze comes
The white cottonballs fall
Sparkling like a star
Winter, it calls
With creatures crawling across
Leaving their amazing marks
Kids you see laughing and chucking
Cottonballs cover tree barks
The new season drowns the buzzing of bugs
and the splashing of the scaly fish
Killing the coyotes howl
You'll hear all of the onamatopeia soonish
When the wintery breeze comes
The white cottonballs fall
Sparkling like a star
Winter, it calls
With creatures crawling across
Leaving their amazing marks
Kids you see laughing and chucking
Cottonballs cover tree barks
The new season drowns the buzzing of bugs
and the splashing of the scaly fish
Killing the coyotes howl
You'll hear all of the onamatopeia soonish
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by mamabear Fri 04 Jul 2008, 00:32
very good. Pancakes.
And Caihlem, I am impressed so much old wisdom in such a young man, and so beautifully phrased.
Ever thought of writing lyrics, you are a natural
Just had to write something myself
Lament of an aging hippy
I wish I knew a way to be,
the way I want others to see.
I would not be old or fat or grey
I would be young and free to say
What things are wrong with the world we have made
What price the plants and animals paid
Where are the angry young men that
When I was young made a big impact
With protests and marches the bomb we banned,
to save the planet we planned and planned
But we have grown old it is plain to see
And I still I wish I knew a way to be
The one who could make things right
But that will have to be another night
And Caihlem, I am impressed so much old wisdom in such a young man, and so beautifully phrased.
Ever thought of writing lyrics, you are a natural
Just had to write something myself
Lament of an aging hippy
I wish I knew a way to be,
the way I want others to see.
I would not be old or fat or grey
I would be young and free to say
What things are wrong with the world we have made
What price the plants and animals paid
Where are the angry young men that
When I was young made a big impact
With protests and marches the bomb we banned,
to save the planet we planned and planned
But we have grown old it is plain to see
And I still I wish I knew a way to be
The one who could make things right
But that will have to be another night
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by Dot Com Fri 04 Jul 2008, 03:16
Edited:
Congratulations Zinex
Congratulations Zinex
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by Doctor Inferno Fri 04 Jul 2008, 06:40
Admins, Mods they're the best!
Putting servers to the test!
When they're done we'll have a blast,
Lets just hope this time it lasts!
they are just so cool and dope,
they fill users up with hope.
If the server lags again.
The Admins will use their Brain!
they'll be there to fix it then!
Al of us gets a perfect Ten.
workin for us through the day,
So that we can all say "Yipee yay yAy!"
Thanks for all the bugs you've halted
And all the spammers you've assaulted!
After all the stuff we share
It just shows that we care!
that is all i have to say
And I know I'll always stay!
Putting servers to the test!
When they're done we'll have a blast,
Lets just hope this time it lasts!
they are just so cool and dope,
they fill users up with hope.
If the server lags again.
The Admins will use their Brain!
they'll be there to fix it then!
Al of us gets a perfect Ten.
workin for us through the day,
So that we can all say "Yipee yay yAy!"
Thanks for all the bugs you've halted
And all the spammers you've assaulted!
After all the stuff we share
It just shows that we care!
that is all i have to say
And I know I'll always stay!
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by zinex Fri 04 Jul 2008, 09:16
Its a year in the future,
around three thousand and four,
the world is in chaos,
putrid and poor.
The water is rising, up over the shore,
coming at last to cleanse off our gore.
Mutations of humans and animals galore,
the diseased and the dead litter the floor.
The skies are black with clouds of acid,
The powerplants stand empty and placid,
Trees and flowers, drooping and flacid,
All becomes rank, rotten and rancid.
The acrid air sears the lung,
the festering food flays the tongue
The bloodless corpses lay as flung,
with flies feeding as though on dung.
The few that are still able to think,
as they approach the beckoning brink,
gasping and groaning, in need of a drink,
wish they could change it all, in a blink.
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Re: POETRY CONTEST!! WIN PRIZES!!!
by crystal786 Fri 04 Jul 2008, 22:40
The poems were really good and I was looking for the most meaningful poem. The most meaningful poems were by Mamabear, Caihlem and Zinex. The winner is.............ZINEX!
Here is your prize:
You dont have to use it if you dont want. Thanks to everybody who participated.
Here is your prize:
You dont have to use it if you dont want. Thanks to everybody who participated.
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by zinex Fri 04 Jul 2008, 23:21
thank you very much crystal i will glady use your graphic. xx
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by Nessa Sun 06 Jul 2008, 21:29
Wow, I missed this whole contest? 
What wonderful poetry here, Very impressive everyone, Great work guys.
Congrats Zinex, your poem was beautiful hunni <3 And what a cute new Avatar, I was so wondering where you got that from, tehe
Crystal cheater, next time I would like to have voted as well silly girly.
I know exactly who's poem I would've voted for here. Maybe next time?
What wonderful poetry here, Very impressive everyone, Great work guys.
Congrats Zinex, your poem was beautiful hunni <3 And what a cute new Avatar, I was so wondering where you got that from, tehe
Crystal cheater, next time I would like to have voted as well silly girly.
I know exactly who's poem I would've voted for here. Maybe next time?
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by Guest Tue 08 Jul 2008, 01:52
Caihlem wrote:If I entered one of my pieces, half would laugh, the others would praise only because I'm the Admin
Not me!
Kilsek and Skittles whent up the hill to fetch a pail of water,
Oh hold on this is a family site!
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by zinex Tue 08 Jul 2008, 07:16
why dont we have another one? then put up a poll for everyone to vote?
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by crystal786 Thu 10 Jul 2008, 20:32
Yeah ok. I'll be more than happy to create another graphic.
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by Luka_08 Thu 10 Jul 2008, 20:36
i have a really nice poem, i think it is too late for this, but anyway can i post it here?
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by crystal786 Thu 10 Jul 2008, 20:46
This thread can be locked now to avoid members posting in this poetry contest instead of the other one.
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