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Post by Goodscout Fri 20 Feb 2009 - 3:02

I was reading your terms of service page and found a great many misspellings and use errors. Corrected in Red.

GENERAL CONDITIONS OF USE OF SERVICE
While using Hitskin.com service, don't send any skins with illegal, pornographic content nor or that violates violating author rights. If you do, you will be banned, the skin deleted, and competent appropriate authorities notified if necessary.
1. Sending a skin
Sending a skin, like its installation, are free. Only a registration with a valid email is requestedired to send a skin. This sSending must be done by the skin creator, after installing it on a Forumotion.com forum.

That's better, but not perfect.
2. Terms of service
Hitskin.com takes has the right to delete any uploaded skin, and declines all responsability responsibility in case of a missing registration link or a moved file address.
The following type of skins, assumed "abusive" can not be sent under any circumstance :
Illegal content, pornographic or disturbing skins.
Skins that violate the copyright laws of any entity except the creator.
Uncomplete Incomplete skins
The sending of abusive skins can result in an immediate halt to the user right to use Hitskin.
Hitskin and all its files might not be available, Hitskin can't be held responsible. An aAccount connected to abusive files can be deleted, Hitskin can't be held responsible for the lose loss of this abusive files. Bypassing the Terms of Service can lead to prosecution.
3. Confidentiality
All informations provided by the users are strictly confidential. Hitskin can will access this communicate those informations if a user bypasses the Terms of Service, if he has committed acts reprehensible by the law, or if Hitskin judged it necessary or appropriate.
4. Jurisdictional policy
The Terms of Service can be modified without further notice. All files are copyrighted©️ to their respective owners. Hitskin leaves the entire files jurisdictional responsability to their respective users. Hitskin can't be held responsible for the sent skins content, nor with their affiliation with any entity that can be represented in sent skins images.
All other content is under Hitskin copyright©️.
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Post by thunderboyx Fri 20 Feb 2009 - 3:13

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Post by Carryn Fri 20 Feb 2009 - 3:56

Goodscout wrote:I was reading your terms of service page and found a great many misspellings and use errors. Corrected in Red.

GENERAL CONDITIONS OF USE OF SERVICE
While using Hitskin.com service, don't send any skins with illegal, pornographic content nor or that violates violating author rights. If you do, you will be banned, the skin deleted, and competent appropriate authorities notified if necessary.
1. Sending a skin
Sending a skin, like its installation, are free. Only a registration with a valid email is requestedired to send a skin. This sSending must be done by the skin creator, after installing it on a Forumotion.com forum.

That's better, but not perfect.
2. Terms of service
Hitskin.com takes has the right to delete any uploaded skin, and declines all responsability responsibility in case of a missing registration link or a moved file address.
The following type of skins, assumed "abusive" can not be sent under any circumstance :
Illegal content, pornographic or disturbing skins.
Skins that violate the copyright laws of any entity except the creator.
Uncomplete Incomplete skins
The sending of abusive skins can result in an immediate halt to the user right to use Hitskin.
Hitskin and all its files might not be available, Hitskin can't be held responsible. An aAccount connected to abusive files can be deleted, Hitskin can't be held responsible for the lose loss of this abusive files. Bypassing the Terms of Service can lead to prosecution.
3. Confidentiality
All informations provided by the users are strictly confidential. Hitskin can will access this communicate those informations if a user bypasses the Terms of Service, if he has committed acts reprehensible by the law, or if Hitskin judged it necessary or appropriate.
4. Jurisdictional policy
The Terms of Service can be modified without further notice. All files are copyrighted©️ to their respective owners. Hitskin leaves the entire files jurisdictional responsability to their respective users. Hitskin can't be held responsible for the sent skins content, nor with their affiliation with any entity that can be represented in sent skins images.
All other content is under Hitskin copyright©️.
You might want to post that over in this thread
https://help.forumotion.com/need-of-a-technician-f3/help-us-spelling-grammar-structure-errors-in-english-t7455.htm
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