Cutted ranks

Font:Arabic Typesetting
Font Size:25
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Creation File:PNG

So i made these, i just wanted to make a seperate "rank" for the icon itself. You might noticed the white cuts, i added that because something was wrong with the "rank background" so i added it.

Please give me all feedback!























Thanks guys and girls

Best regards

Vaccam

Not bad, I don't know if it's my screen but the text seems blurry. Also you can use the $ symbol for VIP or Donator rank. Try using the gradient tools, it will give it a nice look.

BlackScorpion wrote:Not bad,  I don't know if it's my screen but the text seems blurry. Also you can use the $ symbol for VIP or Donator rank. Try using the gradient tools, it will give it a nice look.

Thanks, it is not blurry on my screen. I will try both of them, could you maybe rate them for example (7/10), ahahha.

Yes it's seems bit blurry ..  8/10

iyaaz wrote:Yes it's seems bit blurry ..  8/10

Really :O I cant see it, thanks

Are pretty nice but you can work more for icons
9/10

candy_fear wrote:Are pretty nice but you can work more for icons
9/10

Thanks, i wanted the icons to be simple. I like simple icons

Thanks for good rating !

Not to bad..

I agree that the text is a little fuzzy. If you blow it up you'll see the light pixels around the lettering. When the text does that, I erase the offending pixels to clean up the lettering.

Also there is white in the corners that will show up when placed on a darker background. Not sure how you got that but transparent would be better.

You could also add a 1 or 2 pixel bevel. Some like that, some don't but you could try it and see if you like it. Some things it looks good on, others not so much.

A darker stroke would also help the ranks pop off the page.

Bottom line is that you have to come up with your own style and hopefully others will like your 'visions'. You can't make everyone happy but you have to play with different styles and techniques to find what appeals to you. Find other peoples work that really appeals to you and enlarge their work and see if you can figure out what they did and what you would need to do to make something like it. That will teach you tons and there is lots of tutorials on line to learn the different techniques.

You are improving so keep it up and practice, practice, practice...

DustyBones wrote:Not to bad..

I agree that the text is a little fuzzy. If you blow it up you'll see the light pixels around the lettering. When the text does that, I erase the offending pixels to clean up the lettering.

Also there is white in the corners that will show up when placed on a darker background. Not sure how you got that but transparent would be better.

You could also add a 1 or 2 pixel bevel. Some like that, some don't but you could try it and see if you like it. Some things it looks good on, others not so much.

A darker stroke would also help the ranks pop off the page.

Bottom line is that you have to come up with your own style and hopefully others will like your 'visions'. You can't make everyone happy but you have to play with different styles and techniques to find what appeals to you. Find other peoples work that really appeals to you and enlarge their work and see if you can figure out what they did and what you would need to do to make something like it. That will teach you tons and there is lots of tutorials on line to learn the different techniques.

You are improving so keep it up and practice, practice, practice...  

Thanks that was a really good feedback,

Im am always working on transparent backgrounds, but something really got messed up with the corners, and the only color that i could put there was white. I have some experience with bevel but sometimes i dont like it, i never had the though of putting bevel in these small ranks, i always thought that that were for logos and banners. Will try next time.

Once again great feedback, helps me alot here. Thank you for your honesty and you help.

Help to you 10/10

Nice Improvement, vaccam!! You work keeps getting better! =) Wonderful work!

Leah7 wrote:Nice Improvement, vaccam!!  You work keeps getting better!  =)  Wonderful work!

Thank you Leah !

Very good.

I would probably take an eraser to the corners; make sure its soft too, just to remove that white. If put on a dark forum those corners would really stand out. KIU

Ange Tuteur wrote:Very good.

I would probably take an eraser to the corners; make sure its soft too, just to remove that white. If put on a dark forum those corners would really stand out. KIU

Thanks !

You didn't try to put imagination in your work. Simple regular font without additions, same as buttons shape... And each can put downloaded icons from internet.
I would say 2/10.

***AFINA*** wrote:You didn't try to put imagination in your work. Simple regular font without additions, same as buttons shape... And each can put downloaded icons from internet.
I would say 2/10.

How would you know that? Even if i am not at your level you cannot say that i didnt put imagination in my work. I tried my best, stop criticizing people. If you dont like their work do some of your own. Simple fonts are often the best and the most good looking. The shape was suppose to be that way and ofc you can download icons from the internet. I like the icons simple.

I like these.  They are simple, however, I like that you use some different icons with different ranks.  Good job!  10/10

Bazinga! wrote:I like these.  They are simple, however, I like that you use some different icons with different ranks.  Good job!  10/10

Thanks mate !

***AFINA*** wrote:You didn't try to put imagination in your work. Simple regular font without additions, same as buttons shape... And each can put downloaded icons from internet.
I would say 2/10.

This is a bit harsh. If you were following vaccams progress you would have know he is a beginner. So him posting his creations to us to be criticised takes alot.

Honestly, they aren't that bad. Just follow the tips that everyone gave above. It reminds me of my times. You will get better at it.   

 Thanks for the support guys ! Means alot

Your proposal has been accepted.